I thought I would have more than this by now. But sometimes the words don't come. I have a fairly good idea where this is going, as I have in the past. But now it is far closer to being finished. I don't want to rush to the end and get something of mediocre quality, and I feel that way about some of what has come out. But not writing is worse than writing a mediocre draft, as I was taught. That's part of why I have been trying this blog, updated irregularly as it is. I've had fun conversations similar to the first few blog posts recently and maybe I'll try and condense some thoughts along those lines in the future.
As it stands, I'm thinking about what aspects of robotics and programming I could put in for Lee, since that seems to be a sticking point. As is the relationship between Diane and Thor, and father and daughter. So much of this feels rushed. What parts would you appreciate being expanded, or what character do you want to learn something about?
As it stands, I'm thinking about what aspects of robotics and programming I could put in for Lee, since that seems to be a sticking point. As is the relationship between Diane and Thor, and father and daughter. So much of this feels rushed. What parts would you appreciate being expanded, or what character do you want to learn something about?

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